Re: Live, Love, Burn, Die

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Re: Live, Love, Burn, Die

Post by Crystala Endivain » 2011-06-02 20:06

In case you haven't been reading this thread, I strongly encourage you to at least take a quick gander.

Draaygo, I just wanted to say "wow, just... wow!" Yeah, I'm pretty much speechless ;) Keep up the great work and I look forward to seeing the next part :D
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Re: Live, Love, Burn, Die

Post by DraaygoRiinuuk » 2011-06-02 22:08

Dangit, Fini, now you're gonna get everyones hopes up, and they're gonna start thinking I actually know what I'm doing! :P

In all seriousness, it's been REALLY fun. Thanks for the support!
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Changing me inside.
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Re: Live, Love, Burn, Die

Post by Crystala Endivain » 2011-06-02 22:13

No pressure buddy ;)
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Re: Live, Love, Burn, Die

Post by DraaygoRiinuuk » 2011-08-09 00:27

Well, this seemed like the best place to put this so here goes.

Live, Love, Burn, Die is now complete. *Bursts into tears*

Anyway, in all seriousness, it was a lot of fun to write, and, based on some of your comments, equally as fun to read. I know some people wanted to wait for it to be finished before reading it, so I'm going to leave it in the Lounge for a bit instead of archiving it right away so they have easier access.

As a personal request, I would like everyone to read it, if they get the chance, since I see it as a sort of milestone in my writing. I like to think I have grown as a writer in my time here and LLBD helped me show that. That being said, I know that I still need to grow and hope that those who do read it offer me some constructive criticism to help me narrow down what I need to work on to further grow and expand my skillset.

Thank you for your time.

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Draaygo :P
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Changing me inside.
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